Cycling naked over
hills of stars
through blackest
night filled with hope
on the brink of tomorrow
I shudder with the
wind, but goosebumps
or not
I wouldn’t have it
any other way.
.
Written for: http://magpietales.blogspot.com/
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J Cosmo Newbery Said:
on July 30, 2011 at 9:55 pm
Does a full moon come into the equation?
mypoeticlicense Said:
on July 30, 2011 at 11:12 pm
funny! good one.
- Dina
PattyF Said:
on July 29, 2011 at 11:13 pm
Wow! Simply lovely!
jinksy Said:
on July 29, 2011 at 5:54 am
‘Through blackest night on the brink of tomorrow’ Mmmmm….nice.
tess kincaid Said:
on July 26, 2011 at 1:57 pm
This is really beautiful, Dina.
Window Lad Said:
on July 25, 2011 at 11:48 pm
…i am feeling the same way too.. but i run a bit moody with the pic this week.. adorable write!(:
~Kelvin
Sue J Said:
on July 25, 2011 at 8:30 pm
Great poem.
Kay Davies Said:
on July 25, 2011 at 7:44 pm
“on the brink of tomorrow”
Beautiful, and so very nicely done.
—Kay, Alberta, Canada
Other Mary Said:
on July 25, 2011 at 5:50 pm
Lovely one, I especially like your second stanza, and your closing lines really nail it!
Jingle Said:
on July 25, 2011 at 2:51 pm
amazing …
friko Said:
on July 25, 2011 at 2:30 pm
bare bum on bicycle.
I’d shudder with the pain of it.
nice poem.
Reflections Said:
on July 25, 2011 at 12:09 pm
Wonderful piece… can really feel the joy, the goosebumps on the wind.
slpmartin Said:
on July 25, 2011 at 11:24 am
The thought of the future often brings goosebumps…enjoyable read.
Julie Jordan Scott Said:
on July 25, 2011 at 11:19 am
Love this… and am so grateful you reached through the facebook ethers and nudged me into writing. Last night I was thinking “I am so stuck with my poetry” and this, this opened me up. THANK YOU!
mypoeticlicense Said:
on July 25, 2011 at 11:26 am
Thanks Julie….that’s part of why we’re friends, to help each other stay inspired! I go through such lumps and then, bam, one word from a poet-friend and I’m off…